Thursday, September 2, 2010

The wonderful Venezuelan Food

Venezuelan food can be an interesting experience for tourists. International people get surprised and delighted with the Venezuelan food. One of the reasons is the mix of cultures that happened five hundred years ago. The influences came from the Indians of the country, the Spanish, Africans and Indians. Also one of the good thinks with this food is that most of the ingredients are natural. Vegetables and fruits are harvested in the country, and as an agricultural country the products have few chemicals. This is important because the food is recognize for has a lot of vegetables, fruits and spices, this ones are a combination from a lot cultures because of all the internationals that lives in the country. After the Second World War a lot of Germans, Italians and Spanish people came to Venezuela looking for new opportunities, so we can say that Venezuela food is a delicious cultural combination.

2 comments:

  1. Unity:5
    Coherence: 4. This paragraph talks about mix of cultures, natural, and then cultural combination again. I think the logical structure is not very appropriate. Transitions and progressing are very good.
    Support: 5. All details are very good.
    Mechanics of Writing: 4
    Sentence 7: 5 (recognized), 9 (delete has)

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  2. Unity: 5 topic match this whole paragraph
    Coherence: 4
    Support: 5( there are many details to understand well)
    Mechanis of Writing: 4

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