Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Vina del Mar geared to the turism and "university live"
Vina del Mar is a city in Chile, in the middle of the country. The leaders have been working in the city since several years, because They want to emphasize in geared the city for a new way to increase tourism in the summer, They have more turist centers, security, services, restaurants, everything related to tourism. In the winter, the city is oriented to the students because Vina del Mar has a recognized university worldwide, increase advertising in the country and possibilities for the students. In this way, maintenance the gardens, advantage its beaches and "university live", They generate income to maintenance the city.
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Unity: 5
ReplyDeleteCoherence: 4. It has good logical structure. If the author makes clear who increase advertising, it will be more easy to understand for me.
Support: 5
Mechanis of Writing: 4
The tile: 4 (tourism)
Sentence 2: 11 (for several years), 1 (they), 5 (in geared), 2 (after summer)
3: 14 (university recognized worldwide)
4: 1(they)
Unity: 5
ReplyDeleteCoherence: 5(this is clear to understand )
Support: 4(if there are more example,it could be more better )
Mechanis of Writing: 4