Rubric of Criteria

Jinon,

Unity: 5, all the parts are directly with the topic, I could understand the main idea easily.

Coherence: 4,the logical structure is good defined, but sometimes the transition is not really clear.

Support: 5, excellent support with all the examples and facts by the season especially.

Mechanics of writing: 4

Ricardo,

Unity: 5, it's easy to understand the main idea and the topic.

Coherence: 5, the progression is clear and is related with the topic

Support: 5, good facts

Mechanics of writing: 4, SP (tourist), C (they)

Guswjd,

Unity: 4, the topic and the main idea is not really clear for me, sorry.

Coherence: 3, I'm not really sure, but I think that the structure has to be like a paragraph.

Support: 5, good support

Mechanics of writing: 4, more weaker (weaker)